Wednesday, 18 November 2015

Powerless animation writing


Foe this piece of writing we used the video Powerless .The animation is about an inventor that has failed at his invention, a robot .For my piece of writing I chose to be the inventor.
We had describe the surroundings, the robot, the inventor and the fairy's .I had to use level 3 language feature's like, 
  1. Use a very short sentence.
  2. Start your sentence with an AAWWUBBIS (Opener sentence)
  3. Ly start – Start a sentence with a ly adverb.
  4. Em – dash. A dash is used to set off information in a sentence with dramatic flair.
The subject sentence. Start your sentence with the subject. (Interrupter) 

Here is a link to the video


As I was sleeping out failure for the day, the sound of door creaking awakened me .There was nothing but an empty old cottage, broken down and forgotten .As an owl led outside me, well the parts that were left of me, I needed light fast. The ground was dry and felt like there had been no rain in a long time. I came to a big open space with nothing but a log.
There was more than a log, there it was my failed invention- the first ever curry maker 2000.

As I was walking towards the log, the miniature figure the more bright and colourful brownish Orange fairy got .A magical, helpful, caring and lovely person .I got closer and saw that my invention was helping the fairy .She was stuck, but why would my invention be helping her?

A little Curious,
A funny odd thing.

I helped, but it didn't help anything or anyone.
He was expired.

Friday, 6 November 2015

Blog post market day

Market day

In class lately, we have been working on our inquiry designed to sell .We had to pick our product in the first week of term 4.
Week 1
Choose product, ingredients list provided, product trialled changed.

Week 2
Packaging, design branding and logo creation .What type company will you be? profit or non profit.

Week 3
Advertising your product .What type of advertising will appeal to your buyer .Create your advertising.

Week 4
Production line- make your package .Package and label it ready for selling
Senior team market Friday 6th November

Today was our market and I sold out