In class lately my class and I have been working on a poem called foul shot by Edwin A. Hoey.
We looked at his writing and saw all the techniques that he used in his writing . We made our own piece ,
We chose a sporting moment that took 10 seconds long . I picked Football the last penalty shot 4 all .
Here is my poem below
Taking the shot
                       Extra time has been given
                       It’s  not enough
                       Penalty shootout
                       Tied up 4 all
                       I’ve got the shot 
                      I'm nervous but I have no time 
                     Teammates  cheering 
                     Take the ball 
                     Put it on the spot
                     The ball is slippery ,  wet 
                    Take 7 steps back
                     Eye on the ball
                    Lean
                    Wobble
                   Concentrate
                   Focus
                   Hesitate
                   Can’t wait no longer
                  The whistle goes
                                                                 And then
                                                                                                                  And then 
                I nail it right into bottom corner
               The crowd goes wild
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