In class lately my class and I have been working on a poem called foul shot by Edwin A. Hoey.
We looked at his writing and saw all the techniques that he used in his writing . We made our own piece ,
We chose a sporting moment that took 10 seconds long . I picked Football the last penalty shot 4 all .
Here is my poem below
Taking the shot
Extra time has been given
It’s not enough
Penalty shootout
Tied up 4 all
I’ve got the shot
I'm nervous but I have no time
Teammates cheering
Take the ball
Put it on the spot
The ball is slippery , wet
Take 7 steps back
Eye on the ball
Lean
Wobble
Concentrate
Focus
Hesitate
Can’t wait no longer
The whistle goes
And then
And then
I nail it right into bottom corner
The crowd goes wild
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